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Re: ...And Ye Shall Be Healed: A Short Story (excerpt)

PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 9:51 pm
by Brian
A friend of mine noticed a plot hole. I had to fix it to give Cari more time out so Dave could have time to deal with the faith healers and fall asleep.

Re: ...And Ye Shall Be Healed: A Short Story (excerpt)

PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:34 pm
by Saint
LOL! Writing is fun, isn't it? I'm going to make time today to work on my book as well.

Re: ...And Ye Shall Be Healed: A Short Story (excerpt)

PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2012 7:57 am
by Brian
Decided to post the whole thing on here, to get opinions. I think that's okay, because you need a password to get in. Someone told me once that if you need a password, it's not "public", and thus not considered "published".

Anyway, give it a read and let me know what you think.

Re: ...And Ye Shall Be Healed: A Short Story (first draft)

PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:15 pm
by Brian
Made another little change towards the end. The meal Cari gets Dave is a Value Meal, not a Happy Meal. The Happy Meal is the kids' version. :)